Journal Entry 2

I have started writing my draft for the first paper. I have decided to write this story in first person, even though the event was recent I feel I have conquered the emotion that I held on to for so long. Realizing the potential therapy that writing is becoming for me is making each paragraph a little easier to write. However, I have found that sometimes I almost give to much information and have to rewrite several lines in order to keep the major secret of this paper until the end. I hope that the story comes full circle and my readers will feel at least some of the emotion that I have/had about the happenings I am writing about. The subject matter itself is important and I think a lot of people don't realize the dangers of epilepsy. In any case I can only hope that after the revision of my other numerous revisions will make an impact on the readers of this literary non-fiction piece.